This I would have to say, is my favorite line out of everything I read on your blog (didn't come near to reading it all), Onin, I really love the way the line flows, and the subtle emotion you put into this, it took me like 3 times of carefully reading it before I grasped what it actually meant, so caught up was I in the rhyme scheme!!As light as any shaft of the moon's beams, eyes blue though not serene or delightful, blond as bright as the light of Sol reflected in person drowned away everything far more... Nothing.
Excellent, though, and I'm going to go back and read your twilight related posts too.. I liked your poem in the sand, very unique rhyme scheme, which is great, i have quite a few irregular rhyme schemes myself.. PM me if you want to talk more about your stuff with someone else who writes in a similar fashion...
And Ard, you've already lost, I just haven't posted the answer on here, so as to not ruin the challenge for anyone else....
sorry buddy