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by The Unpublished Author
Tue Jun 21, 2011 10:14 pm
Forum: Quench Your Thirst
Topic: Twilight books editing errors?
Replies: 33
Views: 31960

Re: Twilight books editing errors?

There's something that's always bugged me about the first chapter of Twilight. In the first chapter, Bella mentions that her mother looks like her, but with with short hair and laugh lines (or something along those lines). This description is totally useless, as we don't know what Bella looks like a...
by The Unpublished Author
Tue Jun 21, 2011 3:13 pm
Forum: The New Kid in Town
Topic: Greetings!
Replies: 12
Views: 2733

Re: Greetings!

The number of copies a book has sold does not represent it's quality. The Last Airbender sold hundreds of millions of dollars in tickets, but it's still a horrible movie.
by The Unpublished Author
Mon Jun 20, 2011 8:51 pm
Forum: In the Twilight Zone
Topic: Beta Readers
Replies: 62
Views: 38653

Re: Beta Readers

I am looking for a beta reader to read the first chapter of my Legend of Zelda story. It's short, but some knowledge of the series is recommended.
by The Unpublished Author
Mon Jun 20, 2011 6:37 pm
Forum: The New Kid in Town
Topic: Greetings!
Replies: 12
Views: 2733

Re: Greetings!

Hey everyone, thanks for the replies. It may come off as odd, seeing as I'm male, but romance is my favorite genre to write. Almost every story I've written has featured it as a major theme, even if I didn't intend for it to do so. In fact, when I'm writing romance, writing is at its easiest. Pages ...
by The Unpublished Author
Mon Jun 20, 2011 6:25 pm
Forum: A Run Through the Woods
Topic: Chapter 1 ~ First Impressions
Replies: 260
Views: 54482

Re: Chapter 1 ~ First Impressions

1. Did you relate to Bella right away? If so, what part of her did you identify with? Frankly, no. This initial chapter felt like a cry for attention. When Bella goes and cries in her room (I think it was chapter one), I felt no sympathy. Several things had been established in the first chapter: Fi...
by The Unpublished Author
Thu Jun 16, 2011 11:37 pm
Forum: The New Kid in Town
Topic: Greetings!
Replies: 12
Views: 2733

Greetings!

Hi, I'm Alexander. I can't exactly remember how I found this site, but I have lurked it for a week or so. Seeing many conversations that I would have preferred to take part in, I decided to join. Though I hold no love for Twilight , I am not a troll. Part of my joining is to talk with the fans and ...