Awesome Emancipation Proclamation
This chapter kicked my butt! Carlisle's retrospection at the cliff after dropping Jake's body into the ocean was hard-core and I think his true moment. My heart broke for Jake, who as Carlisle noted, was an invisible man
going unnoticed in life. I know that killed Carlisle having to dispose of Jake that way. I think Carlisle's heart broke for Jake, Edward and the years Carlisle missed of his broken son's life, for Bella, for his own choices, his beloved wife...everything.
He had reached his limit and he was over it.
The shootout was brilliant and had me yelling, hiding - lol, hanging on the edge of my seat and finally wanting to cry when Alec kept getting hit with bullets. I was screaming "Nooooo, you can NOT die! Esme needs you. WE need you!
Alec is the rock god of this story and he has to live. All the Cullens must live along with Bella. *sniffs*
On another note, Kayla I saw on the fic Bite to Break the Skin
by Jillian Landers, that you are one of her beta's? Is that right? If so, I think that's great!!!
That is story is fantatic!! I just started it this evening and she mentioned you in the a/n's.
I'm trying to put some stories on the Community, but Fanfiction is being a butt right now, so I can neither review or put any stories up.
Here are some rec's:
Bite to Break Skin
by Jillian Landers
Across the Universes
An Angry Man
by EdwardsBloodType - I've rec'd this one before, but it needs another shout out.
Some of these are angsty, but are fantastic.
When fanfiction stops being a butt, I will try to add these to the Community. Be looking for them - really worth the read, imo.