Twilight Fanfiction Discussion Thread

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Re: Twilight Fanfiction Discussion Thread

Post by missp » Sun Jan 17, 2010 9:33 am

***SQUEEEEEE***
TPC Updated!! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Amanda Beth!
Hope the move goes well!

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Re: Twilight Fanfiction Discussion Thread

Post by navarre » Sun Jan 17, 2010 9:34 am

Amanda Beth wrote:Published "the" chapter.

I really hope it doesn't suck. :(

Well done, Amanda!! The "scene" was suspenseful, intense and as a whole tinged with sadness, and joy. You did an excellent job of conveying it all. I was glad that Renesmee finally "got it".

You did great!
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Re: Twilight Fanfiction Discussion Thread

Post by missp » Sun Jan 17, 2010 11:48 am

***TPC DISCUSSION...SPOILER ALERT!!***
Kudos Amanda Beth! Wonderfully written!
Renesmee finally realized how childish she was being and gave Bella the respect she deserved! Her heart and mind finally caught up with her physical body. I absolutely loved it...and cried...when Renesmee hooked her finger into Bella's belt loop like she did when she was little. Such a sweet way to say, "I'm sorry...I forgive you...I love you." Then later, she adds words to her actions and makes it all completely right.
Sam's death was hard, but completely right for the story. People die in a war...sad, but inevitable.
So...What happens now that the "law" has been vanquished? Will the vampires still keep their existence secret from humans? What will keep the vampires that feed on human blood from running completely amuck? Hmmmm?? The Cullens don't want power, but even vampires need some type of rules...don't they? ;)

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Re: Twilight Fanfiction Discussion Thread

Post by Amanda Beth » Sun Jan 17, 2010 8:22 pm

Thank you guys! I got so many amazing reviews and I'm so glad because you wouldn't believe how nervous I was that everyone would hate what I did! Now to finish packing and head up to the frigid north...whoohoo.

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Re: Twilight Fanfiction Discussion Thread

Post by missp » Sun Jan 17, 2010 8:30 pm

Amanda Beth~~Heads up! Dress warmly! :D I B SOOOO sowwy for you! You have to leave the wonderful warm glow of the south to move up to the cold frigid overcast North. Keep us posted on your progress!

Happy Sunday, ya'll! It's been rainy and lazy here! I have spent the entire day writing. Chapter 16 of Perfect Forevershould be ready for posting by tomorrow night if not before.

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Post by Openhome » Sun Jan 17, 2010 8:37 pm

It was perfect Amanda Beth! Thanks so much for pushing hard and posting it.
As someone from the cold north, welcome!! Nothing you own will work up here, so just give in and buy Columbia jackets.

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Re: Twilight Fanfiction Discussion Thread

Post by marielle » Mon Jan 18, 2010 6:55 am

I have finally posted my first Fac Fic

it's about Carlisle view on the Pregnancy....

please check it out and tell me what you think
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5675984/1/C ... _pregnancy
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Re: Twilight Fanfiction Discussion Thread

Post by Essay33 » Mon Jan 18, 2010 2:22 pm

A Monday morning tip for fanfiction writers: Don't rely too heavily on Spell Check.

I have shutters on every window of my house.

When someone touches me, I might shudder.

When a woman moans, she utters a noise.

Cows' milk comes from their udders.

The difference one little consonant can make is amazing. It's the difference between captivating your reader or making her howl with unintended laughter.

Now go have a great writing day!
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Re: Twilight Fanfiction Discussion Thread

Post by JillOBean » Mon Jan 18, 2010 2:26 pm

Essay33 wrote:A Monday morning tip for the growing writer...

I have shutters on every window of my house.

When someone touches me, I might shudder.

Word choice matters. Now go have a great writing day!
lol. Word mix-up's like that are usually a-okay with me. I typically "get" what somebody means. But most situations are not so clear cut. I know if somebody's body "shutters" they mean "shudders."

Now I'm going to have to double check my word choices... lol.
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Re: Twilight Fanfiction Discussion Thread

Post by ringswraith » Mon Jan 18, 2010 3:25 pm

JillOBean wrote:
Essay33 wrote:A Monday morning tip for the growing writer...

I have shutters on every window of my house.

When someone touches me, I might shudder.

Word choice matters. Now go have a great writing day!
lol. Word mix-up's like that are usually a-okay with me. I typically "get" what somebody means. But most situations are not so clear cut. I know if somebody's body "shutters" they mean "shudders."

Now I'm going to have to double check my word choices... lol.
Don't forget stutters.

Case in point- one woman in healthcare, who specialized in dealing with new mothers, gave a seminar on breastfeeding. She used spellcheck and printed out fliers. When the day arrived, and she handed them out, she was puzzled as to the looks of horror on the new mothers' faces.

Turns out, her spellcheck corrected the title page to read "Beast Feeding for New Mothers." ;)

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